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The kitsune chronicles chapter 2

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So as you may have noticed this was submitted in PDF. The last time I submitted anything to this website you could copy paste it or something but now it's PDF. 
I tried using adobe reader but they wanted money so I fled as usual. I found a place though that lets you convert the file formats though. Even lets you merge several files into one super file.  convert.neevia.com/pdfconvert/
Totally make use of it if you need it. 

One of the things I messed up on was back story. I thought it added more to the characters that you knew so little about them. I wanted to deliver everything in action but I didn't do that very well. I also ended up telling the backstory eventually in a rather undynamic way. You get to learn more about the characters now and in this chapter Gabo in particular. I'm always trying very hard to be descriptive it's so important that I make their actions and words interesting.  


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