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The kitsune chronicles chapter 1

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This is my first chapter of the redesigned Kitsune Chronicle stories. One of the problems with the original version of South Town and it's residents is that we didn't settle on what sort of environment it was. Everything was mission based which is not really how a police force runs I've seen enough TV shows to represent it better than I previously did. 
Again it was just remnants of how I used to operate. 

So now there is more focus. All the characters were changed and I added a new character with an incredibly bland name. Aside from him you can sort of tell that the core of the characters still exist from the previous story. Nothing gets thrown away just recycled. 

Coming off the heels of writing about ponies I'm feeling better about writing anthros although I don't want to use certain human terms so I more establish what the audience should be imagining when I talk about the characters. The idea is that you DON'T think of Sonic characters unless it's your only frame of reference. What would I like you to think of? I'll leave that up to you although someone here already knows the answer to that question. 

That drawing by the way is of Gabo. It was drawn by Miryhis who is great. 
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